YOUNG BEN THISTLE
EldoriansShepherd and aspiring Sylvan Guard recruit
"A shepherd protects those who can't protect themselves. That's what I want to do—for everyone, not just sheep.""
Identity
- Residence
- Thistle Grazing Lands, outside Oakenhall
- Civilization
- Eldorians
Appearance
• Physical: Lean and wiry from outdoor work, with unruly brown hair and sun-bronzed skin. His eyes are sharp and watchful from years of protecting his flock. • Clothing: Simple practical clothes, with a shepherd's cloak that's been patched many times. His boots are sturdy and well-worn. • Distinguishing Marks: His hands are scarred from animal encounters; he has a small scar on his cheek from a wolf attack; he moves with the confidence of someone used to solitude.
Relationships
- Family - Parents who are shepherds; siblings who help with the flock
- Allies - Other shepherds; the few Sylvan Guards who've noticed his potential
- Rivals - Those who mock his dreams; predators who threaten his flock
Personality
- Traits: Earnest, deeply responsible, struggles with self-doubt, fiercely protective of his flock
- Mannerisms: Constantly counts his sheep; scans the horizon for threats; practices sword forms when alone
- Voice: Cracking with adolescence, with a tendency to use shepherd metaphors even when discussing philosophy.
Backstory
Ben was born to a family of shepherds and has tended flocks since he could walk. He dreams of joining the Sylvan Guard and trains every chance he gets, but fears he's not good enough.
Daily Life
Days with his flock, protecting them from predators, moving them to fresh grazing, practicing his combat skills. Evenings are spent studying and dreaming of knighthood.
Secret
Ben discovered a wounded Sylvan Guard knight in the hills and helped nurse him back to health. The knight promised to sponsor him for recruitment, but Ben is terrified of failing the knight's trust.
Story Hooks
- 1 His flock has been targeted by unusual predators, and he needs help protecting them
- 2 He's been offered a chance to prove himself, but it means leaving his family without help
Narrative Value
Provider of earnest perspective; quest giver for protection missions; source of rural knowledge; potential companion with growth arc. ═══════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════